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Miss Abagail Mannering
Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2000-02-09 04:38 PM

Love is a river
ever changing as it flows...
and occassionally disembarks
from the path it once chose.

It bubbles and churns-
runs shallow and deep...
and some dry up
in the raging stillness of heat.

The currents move differently
through channels and pools,
and in the right dosage
refreshes and cools.

Love, unlike water
can't be bottled or sold.
It comes from the heart
and is NEVER cold.

This was written 2/9/2000 during my abnormal psych class...coincidence? *grins* anyway. I wrote this for my beau for Valentine's day, and because i was kinda thirsty.
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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

[This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 02-09-2000).]

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

1 posted 2000-02-09 04:45 PM

Oh so beautiful!

Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

Miss Abagail Mannering
Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

2 posted 2000-02-09 05:08 PM

thanks....i like it..considering it took me 10 minutes to write it, and only 1 line of revision.

Adriahh
Junior Member

since 2000-02-09

Posts 18

3 posted 2000-02-09 05:27 PM

*giggles and grins*
It's cute !

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

4 posted 2000-02-09 05:42 PM

This just shows you how our brain deals with messages. Hence Thinking about the one you love, Valentine and water. You did combine those very well

I bet he needs a drink too there after.

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Miss Abagail Mannering
Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 136
byron, il

5 posted 2000-02-10 05:14 PM

Thanks Helmut...

"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-02-10 05:50 PM

Very nice miss abagail and may we all enjoy the warm rivers flow. James

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