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soldier of love 1
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soldier of love 1 |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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The soul of war lay upon her soul. Love has finally taken its toll. Her face was wet, soaked with tears. No one under stood her pain or fears. Her eyes were red - pepper spray??? She had been crying all damn day. So hard to breathe, shes gasping for air. She thought they made the "perfect pair". Her heart was broke, shattered like glass. Would this feeling ever pass? As she looks in the mirror what does she see? A solier of love is staring back at me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this. It was put together very well. James |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
this has great imagery....great work.... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So often one is misunderstood when it comes to matters of the heart!! I liked the way she saw herself in the mirror and saw a "Soldier of Love"!! Nicely done!! Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Great response to the challenge! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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