Open Poetry #6 |
Beauty of Love (as promised for the lovely Marge Tindal) |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beauty of love I Love the feeling of the beauty of love found in a close friends hug. I love to feel the beauty of love when a parent and a child share some family love. I love to reveal the desirability of love while sharing laughs with loves happiness. I can not conceal the durability of love gently yearning for a lovers fresh kiss the one you would surely have missed if not for the beauty of love. And this love is like a river thats always flowing before us endlessly. Flowing freely in stylish splendor. A river of love so warm and tender. Beseeching all who care to partake to take a chance for eternity can never be late. Oh, come to me my sweet lover, let's flow together in the beauty of love forever and ever. I can see the beauty of love in every heart now craving a lovers warm caress. and feel the beauty of love while sharing my tenderness. The beauty of love is romantic moonlit walks and late night dinner talks. And its roses for your sweetheart on valentines day and not forgetting anniversaries in a special way. The beauty of love will always remind us to stop and smell the roses and will be revealed to each of us one day when anothers love reaches out unselfishly willing to meet your love halfway. All who are willing can open wide their eyes to see this river of love flowing so freely and magnificently. A shining beacon which dares us to partake of loves sweet mysteries that lie in wait. Truly a blessing to enjoy this beauty of love a precious gift from the heavenly father and given as a beautiful dove. I love to feel the beauty of love in a close friends hug. Jameslee@February9,2000 forMargeTindal.thanksforthehug [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-09-2000).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jmlee, this is very sweet to do for Marge. Her hugs are great! -SEA |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is beautiful, I'm sure she's gonna love it!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
"the beauty of love found in a close friend's hug" I love that line. James this is excellent. I enjoyed the read very much and I'm sure Marge will too. She is a sweetheart, isn't she? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm so glad each of you enjoyed my poem. Thank you Sea and yes her hugs are endearing and desirable. Devina I truly hope she likes this poem. Yes Eloise Marge is a sweetheart. James |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I'm certain that Marge will love and keep this well done poem close to her heart. A great poem for a great person So that's makes you a great person too then doesn't it. I would say so. To love is to give always more then you take You certainly have given more. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James- That is stunningly beautiful. Yes, of course I like it very much. What a sweetheart you are to have come up with such free-flowing phrases. See, I was right ! You DO have a romantic heart ! Bouquets to you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Helmut those are very positive nice words. I appreciate it. Thank you Marge for the beautiful words you have given. You were right about the romantic heart. Such wonderful pictures. James "Its only words and words are all I have to take your heart away." BeeGees..words..from CD One Night Only...1998 |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
James, this poem is right on the mark. Nice layout, too. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Love it! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Long John for your wonderful comments. Echo I believe you love the beauty of love. James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, your poem rings true with sweet sentiment. Lovely of you to dedicate it to Marge. Hugs are made of love. Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Claire. I agree with you totally. I will always, as many others have, enjoy Marge's hugs. Such a compiment for you to say my poem was sweet. I'm feeling good now. James |
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