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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-02-08 07:00 PM


So tenderly

Ann can
do it to me.
Ann can
work me up and down
so passionately.
I liked her
when I met her.
Now I simply
can't forget her.
Tenderly Ann touches my heart
requesting a fresh romantic start.
A woman to Love and appreciate.
Her love to share
impossible for me to wait.
Fresh love
now I see
offered anew
each time we meet.
Only one can reach me
this passionately.
Ann can
so tenderly.

Jameslee@February8,2000forAnn


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devina
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1 posted 2000-02-08 11:39 PM


This is so sweet James...this Ann of yours sounds like quite a catch...you hold on tight dear, and may love be with you!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

First__Knight
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2 posted 2000-02-08 11:43 PM


I like the format.....I has a great style  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-02-09 06:43 PM


Thanks devina...hey, I'm willing but how willing is ann?
Thanks first knight for the compliment.  James

SEA
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4 posted 2000-02-09 06:55 PM


James, Ann is one lucky girl! Wow! So passionate! -SEA
Martie
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5 posted 2000-02-09 07:19 PM


Lovely poem, lovely love.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-02-10 06:58 AM


Thank you sea and martie I appreciate your interest in my poem.  James
Michael
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7 posted 2000-02-10 07:06 AM


A sweet and beautiful poem, James.  What do you mean "How willing is Ann?"  Only one way to find out...and like Devina said, "Hold On".  


Michael

Evad
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8 posted 2000-02-10 07:19 AM


James:
Very nice.  I can feel what your feelings are in the words that you apply.
How does Ann feel about you?

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-02-10 07:41 AM


James-
There's that romanticism again.
Shining brightly within your words.

How willing is Ann?
Catch her if you can.
Then you'll know
if Ann can
romance her man.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kyttn
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10 posted 2000-02-10 11:27 AM


Ann is a very lucky lady!  Wonderful poem, James, keep it up!

Kyttn

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2000-02-10 05:01 PM


Thank you Michael for your nice comments.  I only mean that I am very confident about my feelings for Ann but as of this moment I am not as confident about the feelings Ann has for me.  Ann wants to take her time to get to know me and she wants to see if she likes my personality, and so forth, and of course Ann is right and I need to keep pace with Ann.  You can't hurry love.  I wrote a poem which I will post called "All by myself" and this is the way my heart feels right now.
Evad and Marge this is something the future holds and only Anns heart knows.  Believe me I am doing my part to win Ann's heart.
Thank you Kyttn I appreciate your nice comment.  I appreciate all the wonderful comments with all my heart.   James

Corazon
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12 posted 2000-02-10 05:16 PM


this is beautiful, some day I am going to inspire poetry from a man lol....and someday......oh well.......  
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-02-12 06:45 AM


Thank you corazon for saying that my poem was beautiful.  I appreciate that.  I believe that you will inspire many men to write poetry for you.  May all your poetic fantasies, dreams, and desires come true.  James
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