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just_another_fe
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0 posted 2000-02-09 01:58 AM


She left the ones she cared about
for something left unknown.
Telling the enemy her secrets
while bullets were being thrown.
Guns were going off
and bombs were being dropped.
As she runs to hide
it feels like time has all but stopped.
The enemy just found her.
Gun shot through the heart.
Now her life is over
and thats the sadest part.
She has gone to a better place....above
There she lays "A soldier of love".



© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
First__Knight
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1 posted 2000-02-09 05:11 AM


A remembrance here that love sometimes hurts.....but the sad part is.....It shouldn't have to.  Well written on a good topic  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2000-02-09 10:05 AM


This is a challenge I gave in Poetry challenge everyone!!  

This is kinda cool!!!  You met the challenge!!

Take Care
Bridgette  


 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."

jascanvey
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since 1999-12-26
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3 posted 2000-02-09 01:54 PM


Angie, this is really good! Bravo *clapping hands*
Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
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houston, tx.
4 posted 2000-02-09 01:58 PM


this is really good....thanks for the read..

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2000-02-09 06:40 PM


A very passionate soldier of love
so willing to give her life for this love.
James

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
6 posted 2000-02-09 11:56 PM




I had to come back and read it again... of the two... this one is my favorite!!!  
This soldier is definatly one of deep love!!

Thank You
Bridgette

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
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Canada
7 posted 2000-02-10 05:41 AM


Excellent poem you did
Didn't know what the challange was but I liked it anyhow

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
8 posted 2000-02-10 06:53 PM


This one is my favorite out of the two as well!

 Did Jesus laugh?
I think He did,
'cause He was once
a little kid;
and all of us
were made with joy
both sugar-spice girl
and snake-snail boy!

just_another_fe
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9 posted 2000-02-11 12:03 PM


THANKS EVERYONE THIS IS ALSO MY FAVORITE ONE I DIDNT CARE FOR THE FIRST ONE SO I DECIDED TO RE WRITE IT.   THE CHALLANGE WAS TO WRITE ABOUT THE TOPIC "A SOLDIER OF LOVE"

[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-12-2000).]

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-11-24 01:11 AM


Enjoyed...James
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