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soldier of love 2
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soldier of love 2 |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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She left the ones she cared about for something left unknown. Telling the enemy her secrets while bullets were being thrown. Guns were going off and bombs were being dropped. As she runs to hide it feels like time has all but stopped. The enemy just found her. Gun shot through the heart. Now her life is over and thats the sadest part. She has gone to a better place....above There she lays "A soldier of love". |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
A remembrance here that love sometimes hurts.....but the sad part is.....It shouldn't have to. Well written on a good topic  There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a challenge I gave in Poetry challenge everyone!! This is kinda cool!!! You met the challenge!! Take Care Bridgette Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Angie, this is really good! Bravo *clapping hands* |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
this is really good....thanks for the read.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A very passionate soldier of love so willing to give her life for this love. James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
 I had to come back and read it again... of the two... this one is my favorite!!! This soldier is definatly one of deep love!! Thank You Bridgette |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Excellent poem you did Didn't know what the challange was but I liked it anyhow The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This one is my favorite out of the two as well! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
THANKS EVERYONE THIS IS ALSO MY FAVORITE ONE I DIDNT CARE FOR THE FIRST ONE SO I DECIDED TO RE WRITE IT. THE CHALLANGE WAS TO WRITE ABOUT THE TOPIC "A SOLDIER OF LOVE"[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-12-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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