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She is Maria
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She is Maria |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She is Maria I just met a girl named Maria and suddenly I found my life was not the same anymore...whoops..sorry..the lyrics from West Side Story somehow slipped in... yet this is exactly the way I'll feel when I see Maria again. I was always cool with her before but now I have brand new hot feelings and I want some more. Maria, why did you wear that bright red blouse today? You caught my eye and I can barely look away. You look just like an angel cutie. A fashion model with natural beauty. I was sitting here minding my own business and eating my steak and egg breakfast then all of a sudden out of the corner of my eye I see Maria walking by. Now look at me looking at that silky black hair and her beautiful face and what else a sweet personality loaded with charm and grace. Maria...tell me why every time you walk by you look so good in my eyes!!! She is Maria An angel in disguise need my love and devotion search for a sexual place to hide as she conquers all my emotions. Whoops...Maria...now you got Ricky Martin singing a lyric or two. Hey..he's a very talented singer its true and when you see his show on Sunday he'll sing this song just for you. Maria...I want to make you mine I will always remember your tender lips melting into mine. Those lucious lips filled wlith sweet spices so devine. And as we embraced I can't erase the fragrant smell of fresh exotic flowers. Maria...you are to me and will always be passions finest hour. Yes...its true..I hope Ricky sings his song just for you the song he sings so well "Maria". She is Maria...so lovely Maria. Jameslee@March25,2000 forMaria..andRicky [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 03-25-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow! Lucky Maria, this is beautiful.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HA HA...oh james you sweet ole tomcat...LOL creative and cute poem...so its Maria now... ahhh james...it must be adventure watching you work...so many women...so little time... Loved where you asked her why she wore the red blouse... great work james...thanks for the smiles  take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you dark angel for your wonderful comment. It is Maria that is beautiful. Janet you are a true sweetheart. Maria is only a casual friend..alas I can only hope for more..but I do not expect more. I am a man enjoying the beauty that God has placed all around me. James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so fresh and honest, I enjoyed your breakfast with you...thanks...and I didn't get any of that cholesterol.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Martie for your wonderful comments...steak and eggs is my favorite breakfast but only 2 or 3 days a week..the other times cream of wheat..oatmeal..cereals and fruits. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I stopped by the Islander and gave Maria a copy of this poem much earlier today and she sat across from me and read it and she really enjoyed it and gave me a nice kiss and hug...I thought she had went to see Ricky Martin at the Blaisdell Arena on Sunday but she told me her tickets were for Monday night...so I didn't get to ask her about the show yet...hopefully next time. James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, I must tell you that I love the way you wear your precious heart on your sleeve, at least here at Passions. I feel as though I know you, just from reading your poetry and responses. Your commentary always makes me smile, think, feel, weep...a veritable potpourri of emotion. I so admire your ability to write about how you're feeling in the moment. ~ Claire |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Claire your words are as lovely as a warm Hawaiian night and as smooth as the breeze gently swaying the palm trees in illuminated moonlight. James |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Loved it...makes me glad to be a woman..if theres men like you out there. Thanks for the smile thats still on my face. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
James, this is great! Even if Maria doesn't see through to that wonderful heart, I'm sure someone will!  )Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Oh gee~ A poem just for me~ You shouldn't have ~Great poem~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Done with the style that only you have Lucky lady!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Cheryl I'm glad that you enjoyed this and you are making me glad that I'm a man. Thanks for reading Troy and for your supportive comment...she did smile and laugh while she read this and made some nice comments..and before she left a wonderful kiss form Maria. Marie I am happy that you enjoyed this poem. Butterflies you have given me a compliment that I love. I emailed a copy of this to my son who happens to think he looks like Ricky Martin and he said he likes this poem and I should publish it. He has put a portfolio together and is trying to be a model..so if anyone has any connections let me know. He lives in Lakewood, California. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh my...Maria married a rich man and moved to California...but she will be back...because she is Maria...James |
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