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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-03-06 06:39 AM

I feel like Capt. Kirk

I don't have anyone new but I sure am trying.
All those feelings I had for you are slowly and surely dying.
Its sad but true you took me for granted.
You made me feel like an alien from some far away planet.

Now I have begun a new journey straight into outer space
the mission is to seek and find my celestial place.
I have become just one more alien heart cruising around
where planets, solar systems and stars abound.

My alien heart is free to roam but it wants to find its worldly home.
And new adventures will unfold by the minute
as we blast towards a new mysterious planet.
As we make our heavenly search
I'm beginning to feel like Captain Kirk.
Lets get going Capt. so we can explore the final frontier
and as the spaceship maneuvers thru space
Dr. Spock and Scotty assume their place.
Looks like we're all in this together
our broken hearts are getting better.

On moonlit nights we hope and dream for our final destination
that beautiful starlit day when wayworn hearts will depart from this alien nation.
And on that glorious day we will meet the woman to take our heart away.
Beam her up Scotty the woman of my dreams
destiny can only cooperate
with fates intended soulmate.

Finally two weary sojourners begin to share that much needed embrace
as together they rejoin the human race.
A prince and his princess that for so long traveled alone thru time and space
now share the joy of loves embrace.

Jameslee@March6,2000

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-03-06 06:44 AM

You know - I can almost hear this as a song...

I love the imagery here.

'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-03-06 06:50 AM

Mr. Romantic Heart~
I love this.

'Beam her up Scotty'

Brilliant.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

3 posted 2000-03-06 07:21 AM

Excellent job on this one, I enjoyed the read.

Just remember to come back
when the journey is complete.

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-03-06 07:47 AM

I too enjoyed the imagery in this one. Keep writing, I will keep reading.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-03-06 10:24 AM

BEAM ME UP SCOTTY

Jim... I'm sure she's out there somewhere

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

6 posted 2000-03-07 01:00 AM

This is so creative. I love it and i know this feelin *steals ur heart* i'll take care of it for you k lol

the right person is out there somewhere......maybe somedwe'll find them

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-03-07 07:36 AM

Thank you Severn for your nice comments...it is my goal to write songs...but I am not musically inclined but I will get by with a little help from my friends.
Marge I love your comments...I will sleep good tonight.
Thank you Nurse and I will be back but the journey has just begun.
Marilyn it is my dream to write poetry with lots of imagery.  I thank you for your encouragement.
hoot owl wouldn't that be a dream lovers dream come true if we could only beam our lover to us when our heart was yearning the most?  I think I'll hurry and invent that dream beamer before anyone else does so I can make my first million.
just another fe you are so encouraging and yes I agree with you forever...someday we will meet the one to take our heart away.   Thanks everyone for your lovely magic carpet ride.   James

First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

8 posted 2000-03-08 03:05 AM

I love Star Trek

Beyond space and time there is a place where no man (or woman

) can go unless you let them in......in your heart. Lead her there with your dreams and there she will stay. Nice read Jim and best of luck Capt Kirk

There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2000-03-08 05:16 AM

Thank you First Knight for your nice comments. I have been willing to let many women into my heart and they have not let me into theirs...but my journey continues. I took a simple small piece of paper and wrote "I love you Lena" on it and gave it to this woman I care for and then I watched her face as she read it, and than she signed on the other side "I Love you" but she used a heart for the love word. I have it on a picture right above my computer. This brings joy to my heart. But imagine the joy when we find that we really do love one another or if not her when I really do find a mutual love. James

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2000-07-09 07:13 AM

I was reading the above post and this is four months later and I still have that note from Lena that says I Love You above my computer....I am still waiting and trying...James

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2000-11-26 01:01 AM

Beam me up Scotty...James

JamesMichael
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Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2002-09-04 05:07 AM

Well Lena didn't work out as expected...beam me up Scotty...off for new frontiers...James

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