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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Hide and Seek It’s funny how the mind is weak And plays these games of hide and seek In youth, the conscience as it should Rebukes the bad, promotes the good The older mind , more lightly clad Recalls the good, forgets the bad Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This is a true epopee, and will live a very long time. Exquisite Love Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ You are sparking with your little gem of wisdom. I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth,Oooh I love this!! Well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Liz, So true, So true, forget the bad I do, I do, This one is going on the frig... I love it. Cerenity |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Can't remember what I did this day....so 'tis gone the bad of yesterday.....This old mind loved this one.... |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Recall the good and forget the bad. That`s something that we all should do. Just one man`s thought. Ya know it does sound odd to be able to say that we were all born in the last century. Thank you for another nice read Elizabeth  [This message has been edited by RufffRyder (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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wave Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 12 |
But could it be true, That from the mind of the wise Nothing can hide, yet all is good ? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, this is a little gem! Very good, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Succinct truth! 'Tis well done! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
So few words but says much truth. A gem it is, I agree with Denise! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
APPLAUDING!!!!! WOW Liz...you sure said a great deal with very few words....wonderful!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful Liz, and wise. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have made my heart flutter with your lovely comments. Thank you all very much Liz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
So true, my friend, so true. This is a beauty and it will be treated as such when it is kept in my collection of favorite poems! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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mbugua New Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 6 |
liz. (may i call you liz?)this is the first poem i have read on this site - and i think it is wonderful. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very well said! I enjoy your poetry so much. It's some of the best I've seen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep |
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