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| Open Poetry #6 |
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<- Back to Reality |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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<- Back to Reality! Silence overcomes my world when you enter my thoughts. Movement surrounding me does no longer exist. I see, hear and feel only you, nothing else matters, as I motion over to touch you taking forever to reach you. You are there right in front, but I feel like I've been walking for mile's, hands out stretched reaching to be in your arms. Finally, I touch precious you and yet again, like a time capsule I'm thrown into reality... amongst human existence! Dark Angel. 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely poem, Dark Angel! Sometimes reality can be a real bummer, heh? Well written, of course!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this is one of your best I believe! Fantastic writing my dear. I love it! The last line, thrown back into reality...amongst human existance! Excellent |
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Mystykyl Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 32 |
I think that your poem is really great. Keep up the good work and the best of luck to you. |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I can say no more than - beautiful!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise, you said it hon, yep a real bummer!! Thanks for your lovely reply. -------------------- Angel, You are so sweet with your replies, thank you so very much!! love ya! -------------------- Mystykyl, thank you so much and the best of luck to you too! -------------------- Childomine, thank you! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dark Angel--this is lovely and sad, but how I did enjoy sharing your reverie...thanx. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such nice piece you did I't sure got me thinking Well done The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Where are you getting all this inspiration girl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I can remember your first hesitant poems here...my how you've come alive in your work. This is another example of the talent you have! Good job. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Reality comes much to quick for most of us!!! I can totally relate with this one!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So glad you enjoyed Serenity! Thank you.------------------ Ruth, thank you my friend, for your lovely compliment. ------------------ Sharon, wow I don't know what to say, thank you for your lovely compliment, it really means alot to me. ------------------ Devina, doesn't it such? thank you for your lovely comment. < !signature-->What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Angel of Light - I do know that feeling, kind of frustrating, though precious. Well done! K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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