Open Poetry #6 |
Glimmering Glow |
Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Glimmering Glow Somewhere, somehow yesterday this nurse let down her guard and in walked a sense of pride. She chased and chased away the shadows of herself revealed from the object of her desire. The sight was not a pretty one for invisible she seemed to be as one more beautiful in nature blocked out her glimmering glow. Now she turns to leave real slowly as the glimmer that never was real glows within her illusional mind, and the world of reality but a nightcap away. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Lovely poem, I like this lots, the way you have written it is cool, I look forward to seeing more . With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one . |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nurse...you certainly have been busy Nice poem |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
angelswing, Thank you Hoot, Thank you |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My Lady White This one is not with out heart To see what could have been Had you the flame To light the wick Of my soul. But I burn by another's touch Who's light outshines all others Before my eyes And my heart. My Lady White I beseech thee Do not douse your own light For mine are but one set of eyes And where they are blind to your glow There is another who will know who will see who will feel Beauty Love And Life By its flame [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
My crayons of love I offered free if only in your arms you could've simply cradled me. Now in darkness of empty nights candles melted my soul begone of colorful sights. In the illumination of your soul lies the crayons as with them my heart you stole. Tomorrow's light may shine on you brightly as such but for me it's lost in love's curfew. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poems!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NurseC~ I liked this a lot. Both of them were longingly presented. 'Tomorrow's light may shine on you brightly as such but for me it's lost in love's curfew.' Brilliant ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear nurse,I like your words Both in your post and your response Liz |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah, there is some fine poetry in this post... post and replies both! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Dsnyder, Thank you your always so kind. Marge Tindal, Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed them, I had fun writing them. Elizabeth, Thank you kindly. Poet Devine, Thank you for reading and enjoying, this has been a wonderful challenge for me. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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