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Melody of My Heart #1 (answer to my own challenge)
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Melody of My Heart #1 (answer to my own challenge) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Melody of my heart, song of my life You came into my life without warning Dispelling my darkness with your light You filled my heart with the beauty of your song Bringing my discordant life into harmony again Sharing with me notes I had not heard in so long From the discarded sketches of my life you found a symphony A work of art and of life long forgotten Found the scattered pages on the floor and gave them back to me My life is so much better now that you have come I no longer fear the darkness as I once did For now I have you here, filling my life with sun Melody of my heart, song of my life Teach me again the song long forgotten Fill my days with your music, and with artistry fill my nights. ---------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-16-2000).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven, this is simply wonderful!  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Well done Sven, I really enjoyed the read. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Well said Sven...or should we say "Mr. LOVE"!!!?? This is right from the heart, yep, I can tell!!  Best luck in the world to you hun!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful Sven! Did Jesus laugh? I think He did, 'cause He was once a little kid; and all of us were made with joy both sugar-spice girl and snake-snail boy! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Melody of my heart, song of my life"... Nice one...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven- Lovely, to be sure. When you croon a melody, I feel you're singing just for me. Do you mind if I hum along? This just might be my song. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This is wonderful. And this line sends me dreaming! ...Fill my days with your music, and with artistry fill my nights. So Lovely! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Sven, well done!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I loved this one very much. |
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