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Lust's Impowerment
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Lust's Impowerment |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I crave upon your carnal infliction, Your magic fingertips, my addiction, You and me- a walking contradiction. Impowerment is the disease- Yet to be cured, Enslavement is to be- My downfall for sure. I can't explain this yearning- This attraction beyond measure, I find myself begging, hurting- Honestly needing to be pleasured. Openly I ask of thee- You do not love, So set me free. What is this enchantment- You've bestowed upon me? Too much confusion, Lies between our midst, Yet my senses unmuddle, With just one kiss. I love you- you lie- By imprisonment of this, I'll die. Let me go peacefully by your hand- My lustful desire- I no longer understand. Rather be an angel, you see- Than go on living- Only by desire of thee, The one I love so completely. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Devina, I really liked this... Wonderful!!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is an excellent poem devina. All to real for a great deal of us I'm sure. Marina |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wowee! Talk about the enchainment of love and a slave to passion! You have described it perfectly............ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ This is good. Just plain good. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge obviously knows from whence she speaks, Devina...this is just plain good. The theme of passion's captivity is superbly projected in this piece. Claire |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Immensely emotional poem, devina. This was so GOOD it hurt... Very powerful work. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That's it! Now i KNOW you are my psychic friend...lovely, devina, just lovely... |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Words could do little justice to this work Devina. This has the power to invoke that which many hide.....the power of shameless love. Excellent There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Dark Angel- My thanks, wasn't sure how this one would take!! Marina-Yep, and all to real for me as well!!!  Balladeer- uh-oh...I'm already telling on myself here huh??? G* Marge- Glad you liked, your words always mean so much sweetie!!!! Claire- Yep, Marge always has a way of just "knowing" Thank you!!Michael-I'm glad you can see the many emotions here...Lust is a powerful element indeed!!! Thanks hun!!! serenity- I'm glad we both relate on so many things...Amazing is it not??? Me, phsycic??? You're wonderful dear!!! I'll take that as a compliment!!G* First Knight- Well I guess you can gather that I'm not exactly the blushing female!!hehe Sometimes I'm too honest for my own good!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Ooooooh...*catching my breath* Powerful and enticing... Wonderful Devina.. I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Another bit of your heart has surely been put into this one. I enjoy the talent that you`ve shown in your work. Excellent read devina |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A powerful poem, and easy to relate to the undertow of passion Very well written Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Devina.. .what can I say? I'm all yours. . .if I am to be Passions' slave.. . I want you to be my mistress. . . I really liked this. . .shows the power of love and the power of passion. . . excellent. .. --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
You will never know what it would mena to me to be asked, So honest, so explicitly, so openly. Becauses you are doing it, if comforts me to know that it need not be just a fantasy but something even more vivid, and that someone could love and need me like that someday, and that she will make no bones about telling me and asking me. Can't say more. JM |
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