Open Poetry #5 |
the war of worlds |
Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
my world is crashing in on me the real and the abstract clawing and tearing no longer meshing with an uneasy peace full fledged war has been declared, leaving me spinning and toppling my brain straining for forgetfulness so I won't remember the pain and I won't have to deal with all the very stupid things I did for just today that will affect all tomorrows to come remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
A familiar war to be sure! I've learned there's no point in dwelling on mistakes or misfortunes. It's a terrible waste of time. I do however, wish you well...if this indeed is how you're feeling at the moment. Smile! It takes only a moment and makes you feel so much better!! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I must agree and 'acho' Sally's wrds as well! *hugs* ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - another powerful one... ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
it would take a lot for me to smile at this moment....but....thanks I know it won't last forever.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A very powerful, painful poem. I've been there. (do you know my ex?...hehehe...sorry, it's been so long I can laugh about it now. I truly feel for you. I hope things get better real soon! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm sorry, ilovit. A person as nice as you should be allowed to be happy........hang in there, ok? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: Hmmmmm, what's going on? But I'm sure whatever it is, it's right, right for you... Husg sweetheart Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks all, hugs back |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Forgive, but never forget. Learn, and it was not in vain! Hang in there! |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
I give you hugs and whatever strength I can muster...my thoughts are with you as you struggle through some of lifes difficulties. However, reach inside and smile.. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
****POUNCE***** Sowwy...looked like you needed it...hUGS |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
[email protected] you are right I did, first time I smiled in a couple of days...thanks |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
anytime |
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