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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Another beautiful poem about a beautiful subject. Lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful, and I love trees =o) ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Astraea and Echo I love trees too  I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The mighty oak, A poet of strength and yet tender,too Would make any girl swoon Nice poem Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
In your branches strong and thick Will safety there I find? And from the harshest storms of all Will your love be kind? Will you grant me shelter In times when things are rough? And lend to me a place to sit When I have had enough? Will you provide a quite place For me to lay and rest? A place for me to hang my head When I'm not at my best? Or will your branches confine me So tight I can not breathe? And smother out the life from me If I should try to leave? Will you keep me firmly rooted So tight I can not grow? Then simply turn your back on me When I've no where else to go? Instead of shelter, will you crush All my hopes and all my dreams? And bury me admist the wake Of all your plans and schemes? Will you be my destiny My saving grace, my fate? Or will I learn a lesson here After it is too late? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Your words always show such comfort First Knight. . . I do enjoy them. . . I like the idea of being a tree, branches enveloping the heart of the one I love. . . Excellent my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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