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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Your Kindness Your thoughtful heart opens to all who approach. Soldiers happily march to the tune you hum. Angels gloriously dance as they feel your warm embrace. Eternal candles glow brighter at the whisper of your name. You cast your spiritual inspiration as a means to enlighten. You've given me your kindness as a soft shoulder to lean on. You are my definition of friendship as long as I shall feel emotion. Years may trickle past swiftly but your kindness lights my every day. I wrote this for a friend for her 36th Birthday, after I finished and read it I felt I could have been describing the way I feel about God in my life. Amazing how certain people in our lives can make us feel. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I like it alot, and yes I can see how this related to your feelings about god , very good |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A beautiful and touching tribute to her friendship Lost Dreamer! I do believe that our friends ARE Heaven sent.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful brithday present, she is very lucky to have a friend such as yourself  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As I read this, I thought you were talking about God! What a wonderful surprise to know it was written for a friend. She must be wonderful indeed! Good poem too!  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful! I believe angles walk this earth. People in our lives that are sent to light our path. Beautiful tribute my friend. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've told me before how important your friends are to you... It really shows here... very nice, G..... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
It is amazing how people in our lives can make us feel. The ones who make us feel good and whole are the special ones! You're friend that you wrote this for should feel quite special! Great job! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so wonderful, Gloria! She must be a very wonderful friend! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
It is amazing - and this is a nice poem to express it. ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderful expression of feeling, L.D. His light shines within you. Michael |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Very lucky friend in deed.....and very lucky to have you. Can we be your friends too I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer - What friend would not like to receive a thought as wonderful as this. You and your friend are fortunate,indeed. I first thought of a little boy at play with your imagery of 'Soldiers happily march to the tune you hum.' Very nicely done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Friends are everything, and they are blessed by you! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
What a wonderful tribute to your friend...I'm sure you are a gift to her as well It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
My heartfelt thanks goes out to each and everyone of you for your kind responses. I am blessed to have a friend in her, she's heaven sent. Friends make us who we are in our everyday lives. I feel very blest to be a part of this wonderful family of poets existing here at Passions. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 12-29-1999).] |
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