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CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
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0 posted 2000-01-13 02:41 AM


           Emptiness Inside

The bruises have faded away
and the tears in my eyes have dried
now all i'm left with is emptiness inside

I gave you me
everything inside i had to give
but you used it against me

You waited till you knew i was in love with you
then you tore my heart out
and threw it away

I was so blinded by your love
I couldn't see how bad things really were
I know now, that you didn't care how bad things were

When it came down to it
you would do anything to get what you wanted
no matter what happened to me

As i lay here, thinking about you
I can't help but cry

But I don't know if these tears are because
I miss being with you
or because i hate you for what you did to me

For some reason i still feel like i love you
but i know what we had, wasn't really love
i don't know what it was

I don't think i'll ever be able to forgive you
for what you did to me
but i know i will never be able to forget you either

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Corey Collier
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 17

1 posted 2000-01-13 04:50 AM


Hi, I read your poem.  I know exactly how you feel.  It hurt like hell and thats why I ended up in the hospital.  I've got some poems on here now take a look you can understand how I know what you've been through.  Take care
No one can tell you how to live life.  Life is how you make it.

Corey Collier

devina
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Cali
2 posted 2000-01-13 04:54 AM


Sorry to hear you're having a rough time of it...hope things get better real soon..HUGS!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

whiskey
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3 posted 2000-01-13 08:50 AM


This is sad , I too have been there, look forward thats the only way
Denise
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4 posted 2000-01-13 05:27 PM


Many of us here have been there. But there is life on the other side of this nightmare.
Look forward and move on. And you don't want to forget...forgive but never forget.

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
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5 posted 2000-01-13 09:04 PM


Thank you everyone !!!
Rus Bowden
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since 2000-01-13
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6 posted 2000-01-13 09:28 PM


Hi CrazyChick,

How it feels, not love then what? Emptiness, the fullness disappeared.

The bruises have faded away
and the tears in my eyes have dried
now all i'm left with is emptiness inside


Rus

CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
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7 posted 2000-01-13 11:36 PM


Thank you Rus
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