Open Poetry #5 |
Wishing on a Star |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
" Wishing on a Star " Stars they sparkle in the sky As I think of you tonight Dreams I see of you and I Lost in eyes to where you lie Longing for that chance to be The moon the sun all in between So far across a restless sea I feel you do you think of me ? Waiting here wanting you Makes me feel oh so blue My eyes they cry a single tear To have my love to have you near Wishing to a sky of stars To have you hear in my arms Will my wish tonight come true Will I wake up next to you ? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
*Sigh* - beautiful poem, whiskey. Makes me want to go back to bed and dream myself... I hate that waking up alone thing. Michael |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Whiskey! Denise |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Across the sea you say I went 10 years ago this way My love was an ocean far away I know the feeling that you feel I know how true and real The wish to set a final seal Hope the day is not that far away Well written...I also must say Love will always find a way I know where you are it is late Sleep and dream well there mate |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Michael and Denise for your kind replies Thank you Helmut for you verse its wonderful |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another beautiful creation Whiskey. I really enjoyed the poem. Nathan |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Nate for your reply |
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