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Majestic
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0 posted 2000-01-12 09:33 PM


Kiss me once
A kiss so dear
A kiss of lingering
A kiss so near

Touch me twice
Upon my face
With hands that caress
With fingers that trace

Make me your forever
Under a sky of crystal blue
The scent of the rose fills the air
As my thoughts turn to you




[This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 01-13-2000).]

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Parker
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1 posted 2000-01-13 01:53 PM


Majestic

Very lovely I enjoyed the read.

Parker

Michael
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2 posted 2000-01-13 02:39 PM


Beautiful poem, majestic.  I've been trying to come up with a title for you.  All I can think of, (and it's a wonder I can think at all right now), is "Once, Twice, Forever".
just a suggestion.  

Michael

Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-13 06:34 PM


Yes, this is beautiful! And I like the title that Michael suggested, too!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



Majestic
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4 posted 2000-01-13 10:04 PM


thanks for the suggestion Micheal..I like it..and also thank you all for the comments..
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