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Open Poetry #5

Once, Twice, Forever

Majestic
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 264
houston, tx.

0 posted 2000-01-12 09:33 PM

Kiss me once
A kiss so dear
A kiss of lingering
A kiss so near

Touch me twice
Upon my face
With hands that caress
With fingers that trace

Make me your forever
Under a sky of crystal blue
The scent of the rose fills the air
As my thoughts turn to you

[This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 01-13-2000).]

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

1 posted 2000-01-13 01:53 PM

Majestic

Very lovely I enjoyed the read.

Parker

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2000-01-13 02:39 PM

Beautiful poem, majestic. I've been trying to come up with a title for you. All I can think of, (and it's a wonder I can think at all right now), is "Once, Twice, Forever".
just a suggestion.

Michael

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-13 06:34 PM

Yes, this is beautiful! And I like the title that Michael suggested, too!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Majestic
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 264
houston, tx.

4 posted 2000-01-13 10:04 PM

thanks for the suggestion Micheal..I like it..and also thank you all for the comments..

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