Open Poetry #5 |
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The Puzzle |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA ![]() |
I shape my body Trying somehow to fit the puzzle I know the picture is important Yet acceptance I strive for The imperfections I clearly see When placed with others they go unnoticed Wanting to please, wanting to belong Feeling different, unimportant, and lost There is a void, an empty space Only I can complete ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Melanie, so many people worry so much over appearance unecessarily. That is not where the answer lies at all and anyone who places their acceptance of you in that area isn't worth trying to appease to begin with. You are right, only you can complete or fill that emptiness, but it won't be in a mirror you will see the beauty of the completeness...it will be on the inside. Michael |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I have to agree with Michael here Sweetie! God can fill our voids though! We have to be alright with ourselves first. We have to accept ourselves. And to do that you have to look within! We all have imperfections, but that's what makes us human! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
yeah I know =) ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Echo, It's so good to write your feelings on paper. I never met you but I see a beauty that you haven't recognized. Keep writing, dear. There are so many welcoming ears to listen. Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, we're all ears and all heart! And we all enjoy the beautiful words that you share with us! ![]() Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think you've started quite a fan club here little miss!!! Just remember that anyone who thinks you're not good enough can..er...um how bout you email and I'll tell you what ![]() Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thanks everyone Devina...sounds interesting LoL *evil grin* ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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