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The Eagle |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Eagle High above the valley, upon a starving branch Eight razor sharp claws clenched Silently, no sound escaping he sits with a vigilant eye Raise his beak to release the call The most majestic bird of all The early morning sun rises gradually The observing eye is searching constantly Nothing escapes his magnifying sight Nothing small, nor slight He sees it all The most majestic bird of all His wings spreading in the morning sun Wind and feathers becoming one Vaulting swift and short There is no other of his sort He will never fall The most majestic bird of all With his wide, beautiful set of wings His call still fills the air like hounded strings Soaring high through the vault of heaven Motionless and regal The most majestic bird of all The Eagle I tried to insert a picture of the Eagle that I have drawn here but I still don't know how to do this yet. This explain why I have the Eagle as Icon. Hope you like the poetry. < !signature--> The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is a wonderful tribute to the eagle Helmut, beautifully executed... I like this alot... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is beautiful, Helmut!  Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"His wings spreading in the morning sun Wind and feathers becoming one" Wonderful line here...this piece definitely soars, Helmut. (I sent you a note about how to insert an image in your post)  Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wind and feathers become one with the reader in this exquisite poem. Very well done. Liz |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Pepper Thank you for liking it alot, The eagle is truly a beauty I hope I did justice here. dsnyder Thank you Denise, it uplifted me Meadowmuse Thank you for your comments and I will check my e-mail. Like the soaring part. The picture is also on my home page. In case it doesn't work (newbe here when it comes to html) and you wan't to see it. Are you an artist too? Elizabeth Santos Thank you, hope not everybody flys away now. Appriciate your thoughs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut - Beautiful portrayal of the awesome and majestic beauty of the eagle. Well done. I like it very much. ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Thank you Marge for you words. I'm glad you share the beauty of nature. Ps: Thanks Like your siganture The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Unto the sky the eagles soars, Unto my mind, its hope deplores. Spirited song, so free, so bold, Across the Welkin's Vault of gold. Great Poem, Helmet Eagles are one of my favorite creatures. Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Helmut, a person without sight would be able to envision the eagle through your words. Very, very well done. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your poem soars, Helmut... well done!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Helmut Such a lovley tribute to a beautiful bird |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Splendid work, Helmut. I just love the times when I am outside and get treated to a view of an eagle overhead. I don't see them often, so I revel in the sight when one appears. It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I'm on my lunch Thought check out the passion bunch Michael I thank you here, Went to your web and liked it there Sunshine The wind beneath my wings...that's you I'm glad you like it too I see my words (signature) are true suthern No misunderstanding here Still lol form ear to ear Thanks for your reply whiskey Deep I thought what I should say Your feelings are worth a poem I say I thank thee for reading mine May the sun always for you shine Caroline I see we share the same passion Thank you for your reply to my session One wish I have… For you all May a dream to hold such a bird come true I had the honor to hold a Bald Eagle wohu The most majestic bird of all The look in his eyes is more than breath taking. < !signature--> The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. [This message has been edited by HelmutB (edited 01-13-2000).] |
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