Open Poetry #5 |
The Wind that Wanders |
Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
O gold in the mountains twas the clouds sheen and sparkling sunlight gold; dry mountain, white river quiet shadows dancing upon grass as the high clouds drift past- ancient as memory, sweeter than honey, but yet only one wonder of the earth's creation; good-bye, mountains, but something like crystal shining fragments crashing slowly and as thunder upon the vale; a secret message but not "open sesame", glittering against the water in colors of multi-truth called a rainbow; the water sings night and day, without end, from heights so bold plunging down so far and singing, "come and see why the fish live…today," from the waterfall; farther out, sand swirls and a wrathful sun beats on the cactuses, vultures circle in the cloudless sky, looking for sovereign scrap meat… where the river dies, on that day long ago, the sand rolls over colossal ruins where mummies buried and soldiers perished in ancient times; time is ever-fleeing, the desert mocks me; now, in the wild, where dark is more than light, under canopies wide under trees numerous, where dark creatures dwell fantasies reign rivers and streams are dangerous, snakes dwell everywhere in brambles, around branches, tribes mysterious live in secluded spots making great use of rivers- and the abundant oxygen from the jungle trees; time to time, light will shine beautiful on green plants, greener than any on earth; and on grass dry, where rain is few and shadows are deep and the wind blows forevermore as the ocean roars nearby clouds deep and dark with rain sweep the drylands streams light as crystal and pure as sunlight run in this lonely land; wild beasts lurk agile on their feet, the cheetah, eyes hungry, yet fearless; a summer of crystals in this land-desert where laughter is soon gone as the wind goes. [This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
Wow, Hawkwing, I'll need some time to catch my breath after THAT! Quite a read! Thanks for the experience. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Artur, This read is an experience, a treasure of color. I enjoyed. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You paint a lovely and vivd picture here |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well done. Enjoyed this fine effort. |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
I've been away and unable to check the responses. But thanks. Nice compliment there, Ted! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
K - this was like walking through a lovely land of words. Well done my friend - give yourself a big pat on the back for this. K |
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Ted Reynolds Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 331 |
You earned it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! Very beautiful painting here! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, lookee what the wind blew in.. and in fine style, I might add... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I see Gold has returned, welcome back.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Artur, Such a landscape, so bleak and fiece with such a sense of ancient wonder and mystery, a sense of being forsaken, challenged, and glimmers of hope. Your language is excellent with trusted in vision. Excellent read! Rus |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Definitely a vision and an experience to behold. What a grand and lovely journey you've taken us on. Wonderful work. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Thank you for allowing me to live this vast vision, Artur -- it just swept me along like the wind over the drylands. Breathtaking. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
To everyone: Beautiful responses, I loved them! Severn- I will my friend. Ted- Nice compliment once again. Denise- Thanks! Nan- Thanks Nan. RainbowGirl- Gold? I have never been called that before but I like it. Thanks. Rus- My friend that is a terrific, terrific analysis. I keep those in mind as I write. Alwye- Wonderful, my friend! Skyfyre- I really like both of your names. Thanks once again for the comments. They mean so much to me. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for the wonderful trip. I was sorry when it ended Great poem Liz |
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