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Open Poetry #5

Daydream

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-01-14 11:56 AM

I always had a dream about you,
When you walk by me,
I couldn't believe what I am seeing,
I always had a dream abot you,
Talking sweetly to me,
You look fine,
And you're mine,
I geet kind of crazy,
When I see you,
When you talk to me,
Darling , If you only knew,
All the things that flow,
Through my mind,
But It's just a daydream ,
I'm seeing now,
Althought I know It's unreal,
But wanted to touch you,
Wanted to feel you,
When I close my eyes,
You come and you take me,
It's so deep deep in my daydream,
It's seems It's so real,
To see you standing here,
It just a sweet dream,
Daydream,

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

1 posted 2000-01-14 01:39 PM

nice poem.
melancholy and full of feeling.
Touched me so.

Rus Bowden
Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 139

2 posted 2000-01-14 05:44 PM

hi vandana,

this is some sweet-talkin daydream. a pleasure to read.

I geet kind of crazy,
When I see you,
When you talk to me,
Darling , If you only knew,
All the things that flow,
Through my mind,

rus

[This message has been edited by Rus Bowden (edited 01-14-2000).]

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