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What monkeys do |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What monkeys do Deep within a verdant green, I chanced upon a primal scene, A monkey with a busy head, Making faces as he fed. Teething seeds of gourmet choice, With munching sounds in muffled voice. When suddenly he faced my face, And stared at me in stern embrace. He moved a move of ballet charm, Released his leg and empty arm, Held his tail around the tree. And then the bastard pissed on me. He lacked a little savoir faire Maybe he didn't give a care. I was annoyed to say the least. And swore out loud you little beast But monkeys do what monkeys do And I am through with the monkey zoo. |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Seymour, First you speak of ballet charm and then the surprise! Enjoyed this read. Rus |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
 !Amidst all the traditional, sentimental heart-throbbers posted tonight--what a totally unique and witty piece! I bet tons of middle/high school students wish that editors would throw a few more fun poems like this in their english textbooks! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I say the name and went on in I read and wondered what was wrong with him His style of writting pose changed a bit Something finally did click Sy has a funny site I see Well I like the poem and its fantasy As always I was hanging on the screen For this one is a good scream lol Good thing is i wrote about Eagles and not Monkey business. lol Well I guess it's doesn't matter where it comes from, Or? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
hehehehehe.....SURPRISE.....for you and us!!! Hillarious, Sy!  Personally, I know some people with less class than this little monkey!!!Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - LOL ! Monkey see ... Monkey do ... Seymour see what monkey do. Seymour do back to you ! Pith ... on thith ! LOL ! What a card you are, Seymour. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy - I've seen those monkeys in the wild down there in Lauderdale - in that wooded area right beside the Breakers....hehe... and Anne - You're absolutely right...LOL - One of the reasons I started writing poetry was because I didn't like the quality of the poems they're putting in our Literature books...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy Didn't you know you should never stand under a monkey? Your comic juices are flowing. This is hilarious! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rus, Thank you for the enjoy, I like your stuff. Anne, Thank you for the witty and enlightening comment. Helmut, I enjoyed your signature poem, thank you. Denise, Thank you for the surprise and hillarious. *L* Sy Marge, Cute little poen I enjoyed. *L* Sy Nan, You are so beautiful when you laugh. *L* Sy Elizabeth, Well now I know and I won't do that again. Love ya Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little pieces such as this leave me with a delightful bliss and my grin goes on all day this, nothing more, can I say. Still grinning... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOL |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Enjoyed the poem. Caught off guard and laughed out loud. Thanks we need more humor in life |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
ROFL - You caught me totaaly off guard with this one, Sy. Wonderful... Thanks for the laugh. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Nuff said Making you laugh warms my heart. *L* Sy Pepper, There is nothing like a chuckle to start the day. *L* Sy Spiked, Glad you enjoyed the humor, Thanks for the comment. Micheal, Felt we needed a little change of pace, glad you enjoyed. |
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