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Thoughs of You
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Thoughs of You |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Thoughs of you " Thoughts that rush in to my mind When I think of you I find Lips I wish that I could Kiss That gentle feeling of sweet bliss The moment That our bodies touch Feelings that will mean so much I long to hold you close And tell you of this love I boast Your held close within my heart Our souls together to never part Your friendship means so much to me forever connected we shall be |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Whiskey, this is beautiful, with so much longing.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A love such as this is a precious thing. Beautiful poem. Michael |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Very sweet and worth the wait :0 Drive it like you stole it...LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Very nice, young lady. I like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
WHISKEY YOU ARE POETRY earthman |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is sweet...I like it much It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you to everyone for their kind replies |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are in love! It shows Lovely sentiments here Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your love shines bright with this piece |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Whiskey, your love poetry, is always written beautifully. Nathan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet, beautiful love poem! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sweet poem, hope your dreams come true!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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