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What is beyond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What is beyond How do I love her? I cannot say, To say would be to limit the way. For it lies beyond the narrow of me, The boundaries of what I can see. We live the future, stand in the past, Forever in fear, ever in cast. People are people no matter the coup, They are, what they are subject to. Live on a mountain, valley or shore, People are people, single of core. Wonder of wonders they live and thrive, Wonders of wonders they be alive. But being alive is not my point, It's how do I love her in anoint. I love her in ways cannot be told And frankly I find there be no mold. So I cannot do justice with my pen, It's something like being in Eden again. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Sy your pen must be filled with stardust and roses  Everything that comes out of it is splendid!It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Though your love for her can not be explained, It's power within you can not be contained!!! Lovely, Sy!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
SY, This is wonderful, I agree everything your pen writes is truley Lovely |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You have written some beautiful poetry of late, in fact each and every poem is exquisite, worthy of your first published volume. And I do want an autographed copy of the first printing. Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighs* I second Liz!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your romanticism is showing, Sy, thank you! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Caroline, Well star dust seems on sale today. *L* Sally, A wonderful comment, thank you. Whiskey, The sweetest comment I've ever recieved. Elizabeth, Perhaps, but now I'm not writing or thinking of publishers. Love, Sy Hoot, And I second your second to her second to my second. What ever that means? *L* Sy Sunshine, I hope your enjoying all the commentary. *L* Sy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- *she swoons* ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, To the tune of the lure or the loon? *L* Sy |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are a wonderfully hopeless romantic, Sy.... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Sy......as Nan said, you are becoming one of them damn Romantics.....and I know you have ulterior motives too! All these ladies just drooling over your work and your "hunk" picture....yea, that's it.....I think you've even given LongJohn incentive...or at least the ideas anyhow.....Okay, so the poem's really good...blah, blah....yea, really well written and thought provoking...loddie, loddie....and the ladies are all swooning as if you were Elvis in the 60's......but other than your wit, heart, rhyme, talent, supposedly "hunk-like" looks and personality.....I don't see the big deal?...LOL |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
For someone who has no words you certainly expressed it well. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Alright so you nailed me to the what ever. You are a scoundrel and a scamp but to me a champ. Your friend Sy Martie, Cute comment, I enjoyed *L* Sy |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I'm glad to see I'm not the only one That loses speech, and then some Glad you didn't lose your pen where would we all be .... then Nice one Sy....again The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Another great one, Seymour!! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Tabin: The target known but unseen, scored through and through with your flight of words. A marksman beyond compare within these poetic halls. I bow to you and yours. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Simply beautiful, Seymour! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Seymour, I am finding so many works here that I love, this is very beautiful. Parker |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wonderful poem Seymour! He posesses the golden pen and he writes countless classics, again and again. Nathan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There's not much more that I can say There's magic when you write; It sure would be a gloomy day Without your pen's delight! oh....I want one of those autographed books too! <--signature--> Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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cougaryouth Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 25 |
wow quite thought forcing if you know what I mean, I like those deep poems, the ones that make you think. Keep writing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Helmut, Always enjoy your comments. Suthern, Thank you so much *L* Andrew, A wonderful comment, thank you. Corinne, Thanks for the beautiful. Haleyja, Glad you enjoy the sight and my poetry. Nat, Thank you for the wonderful. Denice, Thank you and if I ever get to write a book, I'll send you a copy *L* Cougar, Nice comment, thank you. |
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