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NOPOET
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since 2000-01-11
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0 posted 2000-01-11 08:57 PM


As I sit and watch my TV
I wonder if there is an us that could ever be.............
I know we went out a few times
That were great when we did!
We have wrote each other letters saying we can't wait to see each other next
and now that we have spent that much time, I wish you would have never left.
So now I sit here wondering what I could have done wrong
because with the next girl, I want to make it totally right.
I started to like you a little way too much, so I better let go
before my mind turns to mush.
Here we are hopefully back to platonic friends once again
I know for me it will take some time
as for the love, I wanted to start growing for you
I will now let go
So don't worry!  It will all fade in some dues time..................


© Copyright 2000 Shane - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-11 09:03 PM


Welcome to Passions, Shane! Very sad poem. I can feel your pain in this. Check your email!

 Denise


whiskey
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2 posted 2000-01-11 09:19 PM


So sad I too can feel your pain Welcome to Passions James


[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-11-2000).]

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
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3 posted 2000-01-11 10:04 PM


Touching that's for sure
Welcome to passions in Poerty , eh
Keep up that smile

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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