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Prayer to the Goddess
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Prayer to the Goddess |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Goddess of dark, Goddess of light Give ear to my call I who dwell in your sight Mother of all Giver of light Raise me up, let me not fall. Daughter of mystery, Soverign of the Spirit Hear my prayer this night Help me not to fear it. Embodiment of light You who dwell so near it Help me now in my fight. Lady of heaven, Giver of love Fill me with your power Sent from above Hear me this hour Fill me with your love As I climb life's tower. I call now on your true name Great Isis Mistress of the sea Our help in times of crisis Send your warmth and love to me Cleanse me of my vices And set my spirit free. ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is great Sven !! enjoyed the read, thanks  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven this is beautiful I am touched my kindred ((HUGS)) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
What a beautiful tribute to such a wonderful young lady! I hear she has the biggest heart ever....I know this means alot to her! Great job Sven! You're gonna have one heck of a fan club if you keep praising all the ladies like this! You sure know the way to a woman's heart! hehe (wink)  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sven- I love your style with this one, the first line in every stanza nearly knocked me down..what's that..about FOUR times! Loved the read and the lovely tribute!!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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cougaryouth Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 25 |
WOW you are quite the writer, I must say I envy you keep it up. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Sven, This is wonderful , So beautiful and a lovely tribute , your work amazes me its so great |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful tribute, Sven. What honor you have placed her...and well appreciated I'm sure. Blessings to you both. Michael |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Definitely a beautiful tribute. Exellent work. *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven I'm back again. Just wanted to thank Michael, blessings for you too my friend. Sven hon, I am indeed honoured and touched, these words and many others will be treasured always. ((HUGS)) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sven, this is absolutely beautiful. Enjoyed it very much. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely subject matter for your poem, and a beautiful poem it is. LIz |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You do have a wonderfully romantic and passionate way of expressing yourself... and it's nice to know that our 'down under' friend is appreciated around here... She deserves it for sure... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . your words have indeed made my day! I do not have enough lines to thank you all individually, but there are a few. pFF--You mean I don't already? And yes, I do know the way to the heart. . . whiskey--Thank you for your words, I am indeed humbled. cougaryouth--I only write from the heart, if you do the same, your words will shine. Nan--My words reflect my life my friend. . . Isis--I am so happy to count you as my friend and my kindred spirit. . . thank you for all you've done, and I only hope that I have done the same --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are many wonderful reasons to look at past posts... this is one of them.... |
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