Open Poetry #5 |
One Rose Away From Loving You |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Marge Tindal~ Borne on wings of petaled rose the love I have grows and grows Reaching places within my heart that will not let your memory part Petals falling open-faced, laced with beauty they represent On love sent Their fragrance reaching far into the night, touching noses with delight Far away, you must know, delight sent wafting on this rose just one rose ~l~ ~l~ ~away~ l ~from~ ~loving~~~you~ ~l~ ~l~ l l l l ~l~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Beautiful poem and presentation. *L* Sy |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Wow, Marge, great. This is something I have to print out and frame. Now, I think you may have started something. If Sherry's watching, she's probably gonna want to compete. ~Gene |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a beautiful way to present a beautiful poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Marge! This is beautiful! The words and the formatting!! WOW!! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautifully done. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A rose so nice described in form This love should waether every strom Excellent The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh Marge...are you ever creative...this is really something very special...with Valentines Day coming up...this would make a really gorgeous card... I'm in awe... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I agree with Pepper, this is so special, only from your pen, Marge. Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- Thank you, love. Gene- Well, thank you so much. Balladeer- Thanks, Luv. Especially glad you liked. Mike- Thank you. Helmut- What a sweetie you are. Pepper- Thank YOU. After all, you were the reason I got this idea anyway. My little ~Muse~. Sad thing is that Passion's cards don't format. *boo-hoo* Elizabeth- Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
hehehe.....hey, Marge...you forgot me! I'm up there!! (just wanted to let you know I did respond!) Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is beautiful Marge, love the rose, and love your presentation!!!! Now how good do you do dandelions?? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DENISE - I KNOW, I KNOW ... I APOLOGIZE ! Heck, I even was thinking of something special to say for your great big WOW ! In my defense ... I had to let my pup out. I LOVE YOU, DENISE ! Devina- I think I could do it 'JUST DANDY' You first ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A most beautiful poem Marge and a beautiful way to present it!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel- Thanks for the like. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I LOVE YOU TOO, MARGE!! Denise |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well, I guess you knew that I would love this poem. We have many come to our shop who are one rose away ...and we provide it. Lovely poem Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise- LOL ! Me MORE ! Martie- Awwwwww ! Yes, and it would look good on your shop wall ! You're such a sweetheart. I did think of you as I was 'arranging' it. Whew ! Makes me appreciate my florist more! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
CONGRATULATIONS MARGE ON PASSING 2000 POSTS!!! WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO WAY TO GO GIRL!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise- Thank you, gal. Seems to be so easy to read so many lovely poems. I am so very pleased to be in this family ... a family of friends, indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
This is so grand, Marge...Fantastically designed with a heartful message. THIS is where true inspiration is spawned. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sherry- Thank you. That is a very nice thing for you to say. I hope it inspires you. The toys Ron gives us to play with here have taken some of my words and 'dressed' 'em up real purty ! The words come quickly and easily, the design takes a little more manuevering. It's so much fun. And it slows down my posting ... heck, I write so quickly I'd flood these forums if they'd let me ! Thanks again ... how's the 'cabin fever'? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Outstanding Marge...you always provide such smiles for our hearts. Thank you! Claire |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
Beautiful!!! I am much impressed!!! Alina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire- What a wonderful thing for you to say. I have lots of smiles to share with you all. Alina- Welcome to Passion's. Thank you for liking this. Hope we'll see more of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is done so very beautifully~ I am very impressed~ Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marie~ I'm so glad you found it so appealing. Welcome to our Passion's family. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So very beautiful in content and graphic content. No one does them better than you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you, sweetie~ This one was not only one of my early attempts, but my favorite still. I just KNEW you'd like it. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I was strolling through the archives and look what I came upon! I can't believe that I missed this. Marge, this is stunning in presentation (you are one of the most creative people I know) and in wording. I love this! You are a rose yourself you know Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ I am so pleased the archives are here ... what joy in finding such pleasurable replies. Thank you, dear. This one is among my personal formatted favorites. Appreciate knowing it's beauty is shared. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautiful expression and presentation... Thank you PoetFriend for this delightful read... ~coco~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I thought I caught a whiff of spring back here..... |
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