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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Diffrent Day " Darkness outside The sun it hides Stars shinning Moon glistens Lighting the sky Where are you Where am I Across the sky Where the sun it hides Your day its there For you I care Without me you cry Your heart it flies Over land Over sea Your heart it flies Right here to me My day is through Opposite to you The darkness grows The stars they glow New day dawns Soon will be morn Without you I cry My heart it flies Over land Over sea My heart it flies Right there to you |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Whiskey, this piece has a very real sense of sentiment and longing. Very, very nice.  Claire |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is sweet whiskey, lond distance love can be very difficult sometimes. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Again, very well done, emotional piece, Whiskey! The longing comes through loud and clear! Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is lovely Whiskey, an emotional piece.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you to everyone for their kind replies |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another beautiful piece Whiskey. Nathan |
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