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Love at First Sight
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Love at First Sight |
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Unknown Poet New Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 7Sumner Washington |
Love at First Sight I saw her one day as if seeing her for the first time Her hair was down and she was looking fine I froze in my steps, my eyes locked on her Everything around me just became a blur She was walking right towards me Her beautiful eyes all I could see She saw me looking and gave me a wink She froze me even more for I couldn't blink She finally walked past me and gave me a look I was able to get my strength back that she had took We soon became friends and talked every day Everytime her lips moved, I felt myself slipping away We were soon talking every chance that we got For after awhile my shyness I forgot I finally got the courage to put my arm around her And I noticed a faint smile as she got closer Then we both drew away for we were only friends But I have a feeling that we'll connect ends |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is simply lovely UP....and I hope that you do connect...sounds like you have a great beginning to build on... Welcome to Passions.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've written an awful sweet poem, and what a gentleman!!G* Now I say grab her, kiss her, and make her yours!!!! Good Luck, and hope that all goes well!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Your confidence is refreshing...good luck! And a good poem.  |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
A great poem indeed,im not so sure that I`d take all of the advice that has been givin. Keep up the good work and good luck |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sweet, hopeful poem! Denise |
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Unknown Poet New Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 7Sumner Washington |
Thanks everyone! This is my second poem posted and it's doing well!!! Oh and a little message for The Keeper: The extra extra dry champagne helped man thanks!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
LOL @ champagne... HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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