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amber
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since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 2000-01-10 01:49 AM

Promise me-
      that no matter who turns me away,
      your arms are always open,
      to comfort me, and ease my pain,
      with words now unspoken.

Promise me-
      that you'll stay forever here,
      without a single doubt,
      that this is where you belong,
      understanding what my soul is about.

Promise me-
      I'll never have to feel,
      that I'm holding you back,
      from any kind of happiness,
      that your heart may lack.

Promise me-
      that I dont have to be scared,
      of waking up without your smile,
      for one cherished moment with you,
      makes everything worthwhile.

Promise me-
      before you ask me for my soul,
      Deep inside I have to know,

      just this last time I want to hear,
      that I'll never agian shed a tear,

      that there is no reason to lock away,
      the deepest of my thoughts today,

      becuase you know now you'll always try,
      and you'll never agian say -~-Goodbye-~-



[This message has been edited by amber (edited 01-10-2000).]

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2000-01-10 06:36 AM

Now Amber, being your sis and all and seeing you and him together every day should make you realize how lucky you are to have found love...enjoy your goods times together and STOP WORRYING- you know you have your man wrapped around your finger dear...did I teach you that???G* Nah, you probably wrote the book on it!!!!he he

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-01-10 07:10 AM

Amber -

I enjoyed the layout of this poem.
Nice ideas, with nice flow.
~*Marge*~

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-01-10 07:49 PM

Very sincere, Amber - and very nice.

SnglDad
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 115
Seattle area

4 posted 2000-01-10 07:57 PM

very nice

Devina you must have taught her well if she has him whooped, but nothing in life is for sure or forever.
God Bless and good luck

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

5 posted 2000-01-11 08:43 PM

Amber: Enjoy each moment..

HUGS

Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-11 08:48 PM

Another great poem! You and your sister have sure got great talent!

Denise

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

7 posted 2000-01-12 01:17 AM

Everyones time is very appreciated. thanks to you all. Denise I'm glad to see that you always take the time to comment on most of my poetry, thanks so much.

HelmutB
Senior Member

since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

8 posted 2000-01-12 08:07 AM

I shall agree with Denise
So young but yet so wise
Very nice

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2000-01-12 09:41 AM

Wow Amber....this is very lovely. It sounds as though you need to listen to your sister and your heart a bit on this one though

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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10 posted 2000-01-12 09:50 AM

Amber! Nice to see you again

  Nice work here, it flows well...

Promise me-
before you ask me for my soul,
Deep inside I have to know,

just this last time I want to hear,
that I'll never again shed a tear

Do you remember my old quote?
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Stop worrying girlfriend, and enjoy what you have together

Time goes by too quickly not to revel in the good things in life!

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

Sonny
Junior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 29
Schenectady, NY, USA

11 posted 2000-01-12 11:13 AM

Amber -

Great poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the emotions it brought out in me, but what I don't really get is the whole crying thing... Is it really all that bad to cry? Perhaps in pain, loss, etc. it may appear bad, but it is great therapy. In love, tears shed may act as the catalyst in strengthening the bond that two persons have built. He may never make you cry (I don't know of any such gentlemen - although some of us try not to), but you should anyways due to the great love that manifested due to the unification of two loving souls. Just a thought.
Loved the poem - content and unique form.

Sonny

amber
Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 240
los banos, ca,

12 posted 2000-01-12 03:14 PM

thanks agian to all of you. Caroline its nice to see you agian, I missed being here but a lot has been going on with me. Yes of course i remember your qoute it still sticks in my mind sometimes. Thanks agian!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

13 posted 2000-01-12 03:36 PM

Amber,
I'm impressed with your verses, very lovely indeed, and I liked the different format.
Two thumbs up here!
Liz

(PS Here's a secret tip
- Love is built on trust)

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