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quicksilver girl
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Alberta canada

0 posted 2000-01-07 11:38 AM


     sitting on a grey vinyl seat
    staring into the
    multicolored sky.
    Red burns into
    Orangy yellow
    fades
    into a marine green
    melting through to blue

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-07 11:50 AM


Sounds like a beautiful view!  

 Denise


Shirleeah Storey
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2 posted 2000-01-07 01:19 PM


Been to California and know exactly what you are talking about. Beautiful poem!
WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-01-09 10:21 PM


Moving this to open! Please check your email!
Severn
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4 posted 2000-01-10 07:31 PM


Very descriptive - nicely done!


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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-01-10 08:15 PM


Nice, Quicksilver Girl -
very nice indeed.
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2000-01-11 08:25 AM


A lot said in very few words  
Majestic
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7 posted 2000-01-12 10:55 PM



Save me a seat!

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