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The Dream. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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The Dream. Tonight and every night In my dreams you'll play Shining within the light Of my mind's gateway You stand there still And beckon me to come Using the power and will Of your angelic Wisdom Childlike, you take my hand And whisk me through the sky To the stars, the moon and You teach my soul to fly I swoop and I turn And I laugh out loud with glee Then suddenly come to learn That you have left me…. Alone. Until tomorrow night Once more you'll come to play Shining within the light Of my mind's gateway. Dark Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I enjoyed. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
It's sometimes amazing how we can do anything in our dreams  |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Love the imagery in this. Very good read and boy...do I want some dreams like that!!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like a wonderful dream! Lovely poem, Dark Angel! Denise |
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Gary New Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 5Nottingham. UK |
"Lovely, i really enjoyed this" |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark... wonderful poem, it reminds of nights I've awoke and just had to fall asleep quickly to get back to my dream. Parker |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dark - this is a wonderful capturing of where a dream can take us - and how it can leave us. Wonderful my friend! K |
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SnglDad Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 115Seattle area |
Very nice Kinda reminds me of Peter Pan. May all your dreams be pleasant ones. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Great imagery! But I fly only in my dreams! Heights frighten me!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dark Angel, Are you sure these are dreams and not those flocks of birds you wrote about? Hmmmm This was lovely Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you my friends, for your lovely comments. I appreciate them. Elizabeth, wow you remembered my flock of birds poem thats kewl thanks! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Soul-sib, this one set me back a bit. 'Tis not your usual style and it is very well done . I am glad you directed me to it. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
This is simply beautiful DA - you have captured the wonderful dream-like feeling that you write about, makes me feel whisked away in the dream also. Well done. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Smiles of delight when I read this....Thoughts of freedom and flying....What true dreams...thank you Drive it like you stole it...LOL |
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Marta Junior Member
since 1999-12-20
Posts 18 |
Until tomorrow night Once more you'll come to play Shining within the light Of my mind's gateway. Love the way you ended. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This chaser of dreams really liked this one. ~*Marge*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-bro, thank you for you lovely reply and the lovely compliment. ------------- Moonshine, thanks hon, I am glad that it makes you feel whisked away ------------- Fk, glad it made you smile thank you so much!------------- marta, thank you so much ------------- Marge, glad you liked it!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Angel, It made me remember what its like believing when your a child , I liked it alot |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Nice read there...tanks Flows nicely with my dream The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: WOW!!!!...Stunning! HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
I liked how you said gateway to get to your dreams. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I liked your poem. If only I could have dreams like this! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Thus is the way of pseudo-reality; sometimes the dreams are more real than the reality, are they not? Lovely verse. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
excellent poem DA...(excuse me ...my bed calleth...hehe) Life is a dream, lest ye dare to live it! |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Wow!!! Sweet dreams! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this was remarkable! One of your best I do say! hugs <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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