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Open Poetry #5

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Wendy Flora
Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 182
Virginia

0 posted 2000-01-12 12:40 PM

Unfurled, unrolled, undiscovered country.
Twig in water, resting before the feat
Of beauty and strength.
Touching the paper, flying long in lines
Music made visual, a kind
Of sensual sight.
Colors stream past in mingled hues
Capturing light, like a dew
Drop on a leaf.
Man and Nature in peaceful harmony
For one brief page
Of Art.

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-01-12 12:44 PM

VERY NICE
Wendy Flora
so well put together.
Words worth a thousand pictures.

Earthman

Wendy Flora
Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 182
Virginia

2 posted 2000-01-12 03:04 PM

Thanks. *grin* I didn't think anyone would reply... It's a good feeling.
-wen

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2000-01-12 05:52 PM

You put did a good job of putting your words together. It was a very descript poem. In fact, this poem is a masterpiece.

Nathan

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2000-01-12 05:56 PM

Wendy,
Good paint, good lines, good poem.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2000-01-12 06:30 PM

very beautiful portrait in the simple hues of life!

Corinne

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-01-12 07:13 PM

I agree, you have painted a beautiful work of art!

Denise

Majestic
Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 264
houston, tx.

7 posted 2000-01-12 10:02 PM

I bow to your wisdom...nice job..

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