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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Life My life is full of unanswered questions I seek the answers But i'm scared of the truth As children we play in our big back yards unaware of the truths of this lonely world Our parents shelter us from the heartaches and pain And falsely lead us into believing a lie Once we are let out of our protected worlds and cast out upon the open we see what lays ahead of us in life We see the horrers of this cruel world first hand And wonder what happened to sunday afternoons, playing in the sand box with big brother We experience the tragic loss of loved ones and the cruel reality that people aren't always who they seem to be I sometimes wonder if i ever go back home, Will my matchboxes and barbie dolls will be there waiting for me? or, like everything else, will they be gone to? |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Well you Crazy Chick, I enjoyed your poem, although it made me feel a little well sad, I guess. Fortunately we are all who we seem to be here, because here all we can see is each others HEARTS!!!! EARTHMAN (Paul hoekman) |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you Paul!!!  ) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Unfortunantly, life goes by WAY too fast, thats the good thing about this forum, write it now and you will always have a place to come back and reread, and remember! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
All that you wrote is so true. Some parents keep there childrens life padded. I can remember when I was 8 and my dog died. My parents padded my life then. Boy was I sad and upset when I got older and found out what had truly happen. Anyway.... good work. |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you Devina & Jer |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Crazy chick, I liked your poem although it made me feel sad, Parents sugar coat things for a reason though , could you imagine telling some of the cruel things that happen to a child they dont have the wisdom and they cant deal with the harshness so although unfair I think sometings should be sugar coated for children This is just my opinion anyhow Whiskey  |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you Whiskey ! i understand what your saying, and it is true, but i think there are some things in life parents should talk to their kids about when they're at the right age. Thank you!! |
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cokey_95 Junior Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 35 |
I really like your poem...I have a 4 yr old and it scares me how grown up he is sometimes..to much wisdom for his age..to much heartache for his lil heart.. |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you Cokey_95 !! yes...sometimes kids are a lot smarter than people think!!! |
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