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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho 
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In memory’s lash I saw you flash through yesterday’s deep musings. The winds we changed have rearranged our years; and youth’s enthusings. ~ ~ ~ A sorrow cast in the depths of the past, in a canyon’s echoed hollow. Our holy ground without a sound, taught both of us to follow. ~ ~ ~ Though dear the fire of sweet desire, and ne’er our love could sever; yet a shadow lies beyond youth’s skies; some weeping lasts forever. ...Living is ever like crossing rivers; finding a new life on each shore ... RJG |
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Femme's Father Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 58Carrollton, TX, USA |
Rosemary and Keeper: Some people cannot understand the true depth of meaning of your poems unless they have been there or have compassion for their fellow man. I like both of your poetry..it is full of tender sorrow from the experiences of life..again I say that I for one love your stuff. And I am sure that God will give you two grace to go through the pain so that you may share it with others and comfort them in their sorrows. I say some of our brightest revelations come from some of our darkest experiences.. james david read my poem called the Agony of Death, probably on page 3 |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent poem, Rosemary, with a great rhyme scheme and meter. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is another sad poem Rosemary my heart is with you always  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rosemary, I agree with Balladeer, nice job and a good poem. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now that I can make the connection with you and your husband, I'm able to appreciate the poetry more, as it is beautiful in heart and soul!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Rosemary, you and poetry are synonymous..... |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
I liked the poem even though it was kind of sad. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Rosemary, the depth of emotion in your poetry always touches me. You write so very beautifully. It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Rosemary, your poetry so touches the heart and just worded so beautifully. Parker |
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