Open Poetry #5 |
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A wonderful day |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia ![]() |
" A Wonderful Day" Today I sing My heart within Shinning bright Giving forth a light The sky is blue No gray in sight I have you near Inside myself The birds so happy Up there in flight My eyes are wide Seeing beauty The grass is green Soft on my skin My mind is clear Bad thoughts not there The sun is warm Softly touching me My body new No pains I feel What a day Thank you |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Whiskey, great poem. That's the kind of day to have every day. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Wonderful day and wonderful poem... ![]() Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you" |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Eloise and First knight ![]() |
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Lisa Graham-Marshall Junior Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 23Nottingham. UK |
"Thanx for this..you have just made my day" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Whiskey Your beautiful spirit shines though in this lovely poem, which is the first thing I read this morning to brighten my day. Liz |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lisa , I am glad I could make your day ![]() Liz, Thanks you for your nice comment ![]() |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks everyone you are all great ![]() [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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