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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Tell Me " Tell Me what it is I need to hear Tell me that you'll always be near You see I am afriad of whats above You see I am afraid to be loved Tell me what it is I need Tell me what my self will feed You see I am scared To know You see I am scared you'll go Tell me what it is I feel Tell me why I feel unreal You see I am frightened of life You see I am frigtened of Strife Tell me what it is I think Tell me of my missing link You see I am terrified of you You see I am terrified of feeling blue Tell me what it is I see Tell me the way that I should be You see I fear things unseen You see I fear things mean [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-07-2000).] |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Whiskeysin the house, another good poem, although it concerns me, I hope everything is alright! A Little Concern, Paul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Paul, I am fine just a little down Thanks for your concern  Julie |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Wonderful read. I hope you are feeling better now. Life can be a scary thing, but you have friends here. Thanks for sharing with us. ((((HUGS)))) B Gravitt |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Betty I will be fine just a sad day today for me |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
This is concerning to me too , but I see you said you are ok so that makes me feel ok about it , Great poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whiskey, I will say only two things, first you have talent and second a very old saying. Smile and the world smiles with you. *L* Sy |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you LittleJas and Sy for your touching replies |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Wow Whiskey - great poem! I can relate to this. I hope that you're OK though : ) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
A good poem!!!!!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you Moonshine and Vandana and moonshine I am fine just had a bad day |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Well.......here's a (((((((hug))))))) anyway - I know all about bad days.......lol Glad to hear that you are well : ) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Moonshine Hugs back |
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