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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I dream of a winter morning, when I wake up next to you. With your loving arms around me, there's nothing I'd rather do. I watch you sleep for awhile, as I gently touch your face. You awaken with a smile, and stretch with innocent grace. You whisper that you love me, and once again I'm by your side. I say I love you too- For you alone are my whole life. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Loving poem......He is lucky that you could share such feelings with him  I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so sweet and tender... One thought...it isn't always safe to have someone as your whole life... K...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful, very heartfelt. ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely poem, devina! And lovely pic! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
FK- Thanks so much for your thoughts! Severn- This is one of my older poems, dedicated to my ex fiance, and believe me hun, your words hold much truth. Echo- Thank you hun, and remember, you can e-mail me anytime.((HUGS)) Dsnyder- Why thank you for the compliment! It's still taking some getting use to seeing everyone for the first time, much love to you! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Quite lovely, I must agree. ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
hey sister no more getting fiesty about my slow replies okay, you know that i have been busy hun!!!!jsut kidding well i liked your poem, even though i think that we have already read every poem of each others since we were children, but nonetheless, i read but i dont reply to you, someitmes.....right away..... I guess I am jsut to busy with ELLIS as you would say yourself right. Well your wrong you know that i love you. ( Amber smiles) oh yah how did you like that. well i guess i jsut wanted to say that you know that even through all of the hard times, i know that he still loves you, i can see it in his eyes, wehn he looks at you, i can hear it in his voice when he talks about you. and i know that you love him to and no matter what you say, if it could be right at the moment , you would do anything to be in his armas agian until this day. Im not stupid i know you well enough SO just remember that even if now isnt the time for you, eventually if your love is ment to be, you will be together and i believe that. I love you. YOUR SIStER |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Nice, beautiful and short, but say's it all There is just one tiny thing and it is so small Don't want to repeat it but Severn said it all Very good the poem indeed Make's me getting a tissue to hide the weep The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
One thing I forgot to say U 2 sure have your way U know of whom i speak with this Sister love is such a bliss Well brother too I guess But that would be a bless  It's nice to see this  The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sweet , Very loving Wishing you all the best |
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