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Ayla
Member
since 1999-08-31
Posts 50


0 posted 2000-01-15 06:25 AM


What do you do when you fall in love
with someone who doesnt love you back.
Someone who makes you laugh,makes you smile
yet unknowingly makes you cry,makes you sad.
What do you do when you cant bear to love that
someone any more for it hurts too much.
Yet at the same time drown yourself in his
beautiful eyes and longing for his touch.
What do you do when that someone only
treats you like a friend and nothing more.
Instead of preventing yourself from sinking deeper,
your love for him grows stronger than before.
What do you do when you know that he's hurting bad.
You feel it too and it makes you sad,
What do you do when people say that he loves someone else.
Someone who is prettier,more intelligient and popular.
What do you do when you are trying hard to get him out of your mind,
fate intervenes and makes it hard for you to leave this love behind

I really do not know what I can do anymore other than
to wait and see what the future brings for us all.


 Yesterday is history.Tomorrow is a mystery.Today is a Gift.That's why we call it The Present. - The Millennium Bug


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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-01-15 07:06 AM


In answer to your question you write wonderful poetry like this for others to enjoy and you keep looking til you find the right one to bring you joy.    James
Tarzzan
New Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 7
Deepest, Darkest, Africa
2 posted 2000-01-15 08:53 AM


Beg? Lie? Stalk?......Write a poem?.....nicely done gal..
whiskey
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Senior Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
3 posted 2000-01-15 11:42 AM


I agree with Jmlee , Write more poetry , and keep looking for the right one will come along usually out of the blue , Great poem  
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