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Vaneet Randhawa New Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 5California |
Questions I see your eyes gaze upon me And I wonder of what it is that you see. Am I lovely? Or am I ugly? As for me, if you must know, I must confess, I love you so. I look at you and what I see Is a person that's treasured by me. Your face so gentle, and eyes so pure; The only problem is that love has no cure. You're loved by all So I can't love you Because then I would know That our love isn't true. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is short, but has alot of emotion in it - I too, have heard myself asking these same questions! This poem reminded me of someone I was truly obsessed with, but he thought of me as just a friend - - it was so frustrating to be so overwhelmed by his very presence, and wondering just what went through his head when he thought of me....LOL He probably saw me as an obsessive stalker! **sigh Well, he's married now to a very beautiful young woman, and to this day, I still envy her! I think it's very common to wonder how someone REALLY see's you.... Glad you shared this! Welcome to Passion's - I hope to see more of your work! I think you'll like it here!  Gives you a great opportunity to share your soul and thoughts. Enjoy!** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
I think a lot of people ask themselves these questions....i have numerous times well written, Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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