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Eden way
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Eden way An armature of words desire, She sculptures in poetic fire. A rainbow made of minds insist, Creating phantoms in the mist. She flutters on wings of phrase and charm, That brings my heart to wild alarm. She builts a world of rhythmic rhyme, With the foibles of grace and time. She flies in the mist of amour, On butterfly wings of allure. And the residue leaves veins of goal, That has captured my very soul. And I am caught, her cloak of fashion, In an unbelievable pull of passion. It is here the vortex blinds my eyes, It is here where the nightingale sighs. It is here, my path to Eden way. It is here I would lie and stay. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Sy, This is beautiful you are so talented , your work amazes me  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful! Lovely, lovely words! *sigh* Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*sighs* absolutely lovely Seymore |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is so lovely Your talents are unmatched Love ya, Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whisky, Not quite as beautiful as you from your picture. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you sweet Denise. *L* Sy Hoot, Your sigh send me a high. *L* Sy Elizabeth, There is a small change from the original. A rainbow made of minds insist, Creating phantoms in the mist. Thank you Love Sy. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy I do love this poem so But now I'm going on to read the new one This is so lovely Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Applause, dear Sy.... much applause... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
'Sigh' Sy.... Gorgeous....seems I use that word alot with your pieces... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Applause from you are my dearest wish. *L* Sy Pepper, Your words are as beautiful as your picture. *L* Sy |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
I'll just use the same word again for it describes your poems the best way I know how.... Wonderful... Thanks Sy my friend. B Gravitt |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quite nicely done, Seymour. This speaks with a soft eloquence that flutters like the very winged butterfly of which you speak. ~Marge~ |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Beautiful indeed Seymour. Thanks for the read.. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
To find someone to share this way Your lucky man, what else could I say I like the end, bravo to this conclusion What wonderfull words in fusion Grace covers ever line to read it smooth is such divine Helmut |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Betty, thanks for the wonderful. Marge, Thank you Marge *L* Moon, You welcome and thank you. Helmut, Nice answer, nice poem, thank you. |
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