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Hold me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hold me tight, Don't want this night to end, I want this night to remember, Hold me ,kiss me ,touch me, Hold me close to you, Love is so sweet, Don't want this night to end, Let's remember to the years we spent together, Let's take a deep breathe for the next step we take, So hold me, Tell me If you really care for me , Tell me ,tell me the things we used to say, The night is young and we can make every wish upon very star Hold me tight, Don't let me go, |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I enjoyed the poem very much. You may consider reformatting, break it up, it might be easier on the eye. My first post "snowflake" was not formatted, and I did not consider it much until our good friend Hoot fixed it up for me now I enjoy it more. Keep On Writing, Paul |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
It is nice to be in the arm's of the one we love. I could feel your yearning in this piece. I hope you hear all the things your heart needs to hear soon! Thanks for sharing ! ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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