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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-01-08 07:26 PM


Who, What, When, Where, How, and Why?

Who say's I have no right
to play out in the rain?
What are the rules
if every opinion is different?
When can I count the stars
if they never do appear?
Where would I be tomorrow
if I had not lived today?
How can I look into your eyes
as you roll them up and away?
Why am I the one who fears
that one day I might understand?


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-01-08 08:17 PM


Lost Dreamer -

As usual, you tell it so that I understand it perfectly.
And ... just who says we can't play out in the rain?
Love it !
~Marge~

Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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2 posted 2000-01-08 08:19 PM


Lost Dreamer... I love the way you say it, and get right to the heart of it. I love it.
  


 B Gravitt


Balladeer
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3 posted 2000-01-08 09:49 PM


Once again, dreamer, this is well done!
whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-08 09:56 PM


This is wonderful Dreamer  
First__Knight
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5 posted 2000-01-08 11:11 PM


Sometimes if we don't live for today...we are still living yesterday. Hard to go forward that way.  Live all you can today becasue you maybe given things today that you will never see again.    

 Being in love with someone is more than just saying "I love you"



hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-01-09 08:52 AM


Big smile here...my son often tells me to act my age...I tell him I don't lnow how one is supposed to act at 36...now 37. Seems when the rule book of decorum at certain ages was handed out, someone missed me  
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