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CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
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0 posted 2000-01-07 12:55 PM


          My so-called best friend

We've been friends for 5 years now
But i still don't know who you are
You tell people we're best friends
But you don't care about me
You don't even know me

Sometimes you'll call
and you'll tell me about your day
But you won't listen

I'm crying out for help
But you don't hear me
You just tell me about your parties
and your plans without me

You ask how i am
But you don't wait to hear the answer

Please, just listen to me
I need your help
I need a friend

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Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
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1 posted 2000-01-07 12:59 PM


I think so-called are the key words here. Do you really need a friend like this? Is this really a friend? I'll be your friend.   Email me if you need me.

 B Gravitt


CrazyChick
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since 2000-01-05
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2 posted 2000-01-07 01:19 AM


Thank you Betty. I know know that she is no friend to me, i guess i was just blinded before!  thank you
whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
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3 posted 2000-01-07 02:11 AM


I dont think she deserves your friendship she sounds like a nice peice of work , if you need a friend I am here anytime , Great poem I liked it  
CrazyChick
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4 posted 2000-01-07 02:27 AM


Thank you whiskey!!!
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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5 posted 2000-01-07 03:20 AM


CC, I don't think she is a freind at all, you definatley don't need a so-called friend like that. You're most welcome to email me anytime.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



devina
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Cali
6 posted 2000-01-07 04:26 AM


I think we've all been here before, both young and old, hang in there, I've always been told that you usually only have one GOOD friend in a lifetime, the rest only only acquaintances!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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