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Open Poetry #5

The world took you away

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-01-07 12:09 PM

Sorry,If I hurt you,
If you do,
forgive me,
I'll make it up to you,
Before I could come to you,
The world took you away,
Knowing It's too late to say sorry to you,
Do you remember you loved me
Before the world took you away from me,
If you do remember ,
Then the things I was saying ,
But didin't meant to hurt you,
I used to believe that love was strong,
We're never wrong for this love,
But before I could make it up to you,
The world took you away from me,

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2000-01-07 12:24 PM

So very sad. There are many things I'm sure we all wish we could have said to someone, things we thought to say...but, thought them too late.

Hugs
Excellent poem

[This message has been edited by Satiate (edited 01-07-2000).]

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-01-07 12:55 PM

Another nice poem Vandana. Enjoyed.

Sonny
Junior Member

since 1999-12-18

Posts 29
Schenectady, NY, USA

3 posted 2000-01-07 01:56 PM

Vandana -

By your side I used to lay
Words of passion I used to say
Softly whispering tender desires
In hopes you would ignite the fires
Lighting the way to a golden path
But, darkness dominates the aftermath
Gone are my dreams and my only honor
Replaced by sadness and a dying flower
My inspiration resides in heaven above
Because I did not speak loud enough.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-01-07 02:36 PM

Sad yet lovely, vandana!

Denise

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