Open Poetry #5 |
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Grow Content With Me |
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Sunshine
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Grow Content With Me Pleasure comes forth in abilities not foreseen when life's realities are borne of childhood dreams once dreamt, and through life's days, spent, encompassing one's horizons in varied scenes. Age to one and all can be a despicable curse, but for me, and you, I pray, may maturity disperse all despair of Cimmerian things unknown and in this knowledge, I have certainly grown. My view has broadened beyond my scope as I continue to find pleasure in hope of things not for me, but for every other; nightly I pray Angels over my friends hover. For only on myself and God may I now rely ~ I ask for nothing from anyone, nor buy into a false awareness that comes not from the heart, but if you ask for guidance, that and hope I will impart. For I choose to grow content, a softness to frame my face, and may I always look as to take you in my embrace; permit my contentment then to please your very tired soul, and may you grow content with me, as we both grow, old. ©KRJ 6 January, 2000 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so beautiful! Hope you are feeling better now! ![]() |
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Grandma Jo Member
since 2000-01-02
Posts 51 |
This is truly lovely! Jo |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
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Very impressive Sunshine. Enjoyed. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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'For I choose to grow content...' Many people don't realize that it is definitely their choice to grow content or not! Great poem, Sunshine! I would have to say one of my favorites of yours to date! ![]() Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
I echo every word Denise said. Thank you adding a little sunshine in my life. ![]() B Gravitt |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Having you back is like having a ray of Sunshine! This is excellent writing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Balladeer did not say enough, you are more then a ray of sunshine, you are the sun. Love Sy |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I echo both Balladeer and Sy...and add...Simply Lovely Sunshine.... ![]() Your heart is shining brightly in this piece.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There's a sunshine........ a content one... ![]() ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very beautiful Sunshine |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very inspiring piece. Nicely done Sunshine. ![]() |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I must echo everyone above. Such warm and comforting sentiments...this is beautiful. ![]() |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very lovely thoughts and well expressed Liz |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would respond to each of you individually, but the response to this piece leaves me speechless [yes, me!]... As I promised, I will write less, but hopefully, better... thank you all for your kind words, and thank you for welcoming me back so warmly - I am feeling better, and glad to be home... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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