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Awake Again |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Awake Again " One Glance Seen within All the hurt All the sin Out of Self Scared Inside No where to run No where to hide Rattled trees Howling moon Stars beaming Running lost Dont look behind Screaming voice No-one can hear Silent fear Eyes wide Strong sense Ears open Hair stands Demon seen Heart races Blood flows Legs stiff No where to stay No where to go Dreams ends Awake again |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
There you go ! You've done it again, though now a little scared, still your poetry friend! Paul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Paul sorry to scare you  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The terror of REM paralysis put into verse.... My applause..... (tips hat) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic, Whiskey! Excellent verse! Denise |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Whiskey, Very good! You are so talented! Tamera |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank you to everyone for your kind replies |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
I like this , very good |
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