Open Poetry #5 |
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Mind Mingling |
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manalive325 Junior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 21 |
Mind Mingling Words sculptured, shaped to feed senses and passions. Thoughts intertwine, dance and tangle in steamy fashion. Unknown minds in random meetings intermingle in steamy seethings. A phrase is turned, desire expressed, arousal buoyed, imagining fleeting. Can one find in all this chatter something real, that really matters? Is this play or serious matter? Ingenious techies or mad hatters? The software of the mind is creating. It can make one warm and leave one tingling. Thought meeting thought through word smithing. This amazing place of mind mingling. By Walter J. Sackett 1/'2000 |
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Deborah Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 41 |
Interesting thoughts portrayed in this poem. Deborah |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I agree with Deborah, this is very interesting |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I enjoyed reading this. Interesting thoughts and questions. I think as in the rest of life you will find both the 'serious' and the 'players'. And I believe caution is prudent. Again, I liked this very much! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow Walt...very nice to see you back here!!! I absolutely love the flow to this one. The rhythm dances ![]() |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Minds mingling...words stringling ... This one makes me smile. ![]() |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - this is intriguing. Big thumbs up from me. ![]() '...I want to be free - free to know people and their backgrounds - free to move to different parts of the world...' Sylvia Plath |
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