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Open Poetry #5

Let us Grow Old Together

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

0 posted 2000-01-06 11:42 PM

LET US GROW OLD TOGETHER

These streets of broken glass.
wherein lifelong have I.
Been walking on these bleeding feet's.

These moments of shattered dream.
Only dream that ages pass have I.
Been one filled with, oh! such heartache.

Yesterday,
Like a candle in the dark.
You came and fill my life with sunshine.
Like an oasis in the desert.
You quenched my thirst with your love.

Today,
Living has become a joy of much hope.
Simply to treasure every moment spent.
Whispers of sweet nothing and love bites.
Warm hugs and lullaby and cares and contentment.

Tomorrow,
The stars will shine down down upon us.
And in each others arm pledge we will.
That we will grow old together.....
Forever and a day, in the warmth of our love.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-07 01:02 AM

Wonderful poem Neithem I enjoyed reading it alot

Betty Gravitt
Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 222
Georgia United States

2 posted 2000-01-07 01:07 AM

Well spoken neitham.

B Gravitt

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

3 posted 2000-01-07 04:05 AM

Whiskey: Thanks and am happy you liked the poem.
Betty: Thanks!

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2000-01-07 04:21 AM

Very sweet sentiments dear!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

neitham
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 42
India

5 posted 2000-01-07 05:32 AM

d:Thanks and glad u like it!

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